Monday, 5 January 2015

Drama Evaluation

Our final script follows the story of Shaun, a 21 year old that works in a call centre following the same routine day after day. He walks past a homeless man everyday on his way to work ignoring each time he asks for money to stay in the shelter for a night. The next morning Shaun finds the homeless man collapsed on the floor. From then on the narrative follows Shaun trying to overcome his guilt through firstly trying to save a man from being mugged to finally volunteering at a local charity that supports the homeless community.

The 5-10 minute piece was created through the expansion of our 2 minute piece that we wanted to use as the first section of the film. We wanted the main emotion we produced in the piece of ‘guilt’ to be the turning point of the film where it made the character want to change his life.  However our original plan was changed because our main actor went on holiday without informing us so we had to recast our character to fit in with the shooting schedule. This set back though meant that we could reshoot the scenes we were not completely pleased such as the living room scene, in the two minute piece, that I felt was unsuccessful due to the location we were using and the lighting that was broken. We reshot this scene with the new actor in a different location with better lighting.

In the brief we were instructed that we needed a three-way conversation between characters. Originally our plan was to have two paramedics in a scene after Shaun finds the homeless man dead but this scene ended up being cut last minute due to actors dropping out on the morning of the shoot. This meant that we extended the scene where Shaun talks to his mum and step-dad so that it was a three-way conversation. This meant that the mum was almost an add-on which can be seen in the scene as she leaves early on to make a cup of tea. If we were to reshoot we would make sure to have actors who were available so that we would be able to capture that scene which would really add to the plot and push the story and the guilt that Shaun feels along. Another problem that occurred with the mum and dad scene was that due to the change in main actor the son and father did not look like they could be related as Sid was Indian and Declan has natural blonde hair. This meant that we had to re-write the script so that the dad was now a step-dad. This was done by using words such as “mate” rather than “son”.

While guilt is the main driving force throughout the film, that we show through how Shaun tries to better himself by trying to save a guy getting mugged or by volunteering at a charity, I feel we also portray many emotions linked to modern day life. Shaun seems almost emotionless at the beginning of the film as he is unmoved by the sad stories appearing on the news like he has just become accustomed to stories like this. We also wanted to capture the idea of him being lonely which we did through his inability to communicate with the people around him such as the girl in the lift and even when he is at work he does not call anyone on the phone. With the guilt I feel the main scene that perceives how he is feeling is that of the scene where he talks it through with his step-dad. The actor’s performance in the scene really helps to show how Shaun is feeling about the death of the homeless man. This is backed up through the use of camera angles especially the close up on his face that really captures the anger and guilt that he is feeling.

Even with all these sad emotions running through the film we did not want to end with Shaun not coming through to the other side. To do this we used the charity shop scene to show that Shaun has found a way to get over his guilt without the chance of being hurt again. By ending the film like this Shaun has successfully changed his life for what can be perceived as the better.

During the production of the piece it has helped me gained new insight into the job of a producer. The producer is in charge of the whole running of the piece from shooting days to budget to locations making it a very important aspect to the film.

As producer I had to work closely with all members of the team in different ways; with TS it was orgainsing the post production schedule and then discussing with Danayet in the very baby stages of the piece the idea and message we wanted to portray.  This gave me an insight on every part of the project so I was really able to see the piece change from being an idea into a full piece. This helped to teach me the best ways in which to communicate with the group where I would pass message on and organise meetings showing me how much of a key role the producer is.

My first main role was to help with the casting of the main actor, which was a new role for me as I had never held a proper audition process before. As I was the person who had to ring the actors and tell them whether they were successful or not made me feel very close to the project due to my decisions being the ones that could make or break the project.

Most of my role consisted of problem solving due to problems with actor changes and availability of some locations. I made these easier by constructing a timetable of when everyone was free meaning we could be flexible with when we could shoot and know which members of the group were available. This came in useful as halfway through shooting the film our main actor got a part time job so we had to change the days in which we were shooting as I had made a timetable I knew exactly whenever was free and could move the days too. However we did struggle with all of us being available due to all members of the group being in different modules but we all tried to make sure we turned up to the shoots we could.

Throughout the film I felt like I took on my role successfully and completed all that was expected of me. For example contacting the charity to enquire about using their premises as well as asking if a member of their team could be used as the sales assistant to give the whole film a more authentic feel. When we arrived at the shop I took on the role as producer through sorting the agreement forms with both the charity shop and the role of sales assistant before helping out with the sound. As Tyrese was not present on most of the shoots I took on the role of boom operator to assist T.S. who now had to take on the role of sound recordist as well as editor. Even though Tyrese’s unavailability throughout the film of the piece could have set us back we made sure that we worked hard to overcome this obstacle. T.S. took on the role of sound recordist and I took on the role of boom operator sometimes assisted by Emily if we needed another boom in the scene. We all wanted the piece to turn out the way we wanted so made sure we put in the extra work when needed.

On the rare occasion I was unable to attend a shooting day I made sure that all my tasks were completed before such as during the call centre scene in the 2 minute piece I made sure that the library was well informed of our arrival and had been granted permission by Karl Townsend, the campus manager, beforehand.

The workshop that I felt was most helpful was the one that took place in Workstation 102 that helped us block out a scene that we were given. This helped us learn how a scene can be considered in different ways such as how the actor could react to the dialogue or what angle the camera could be set up to view the scene the best way. This also supported us through working with our actors with how to direct them into the right positions and how to talk scenes through with them. This made us gain an understanding on how difficult it can be to direct a scene using actors, as we needed to explain the exact image we had in our heads for them to be able to act out.

Other seminars that I found really instructive was that of the one to one tutorial group sessions where Chris would watch the rushes we had so far and help to point us in the right direction of where to go to next or what he felt needed to be changed with a certain scene. This also helped us with knowing what tasks needed to be completed for each role such as mine with planning meetings, preparing call sheets and sorting schedules. We all put in to practice what we learnt from these tutorials which I hope shows in the film.

For most of the filming I constructed my own research for my inspirations. My first came from the film Fight Club. The film follows the character of ‘Jack’ who lives a mundane boring life that only consists of going to work and going home similar to our character of Shaun. They both have change happen in their life that moves their lives around, in the case of ‘Jack’ it’s Fight Club and with Shaun it’s the death of the homeless man. While they both change for differently with ‘Jack’ turning towards a more violent way of life and Shaun to helping in a homeless charity shop they both alter their life due to other circumstances.

The Pursuit of Happyness was another influence of mine; this film tackles head on the message that we also want to show. Chris Gardener is made homeless after a bad investment deal leaving him and his son on the street. They take shelter in a church that offers help to the homeless. Throughout the film I wanted to capture a similar idea to help being available to the homeless, which we did through Shaun offering to volunteer while trying to get over his guilt.

Throughout the task I also referred back to the book Producing Short Films. The book helped to instruct me on a lot of the pre-production side of the project as it contained useful information on planning the film such as call sheets, storyboards etc.

Friday, 2 January 2015

Presentation

While the edits and director worked on the edit of the piece I created a presentation for the piece however we didn't get a chance to present it during the end of term showings:

Drama Presentation


Our finalized script followed the journey of Shaun, a 21 year old, who works in a call centre following a boring mundane life. He walks past a homeless man everyday on his way to work ignoring him when he asks for money to stay in the shelter for the night. The next morning Shaun walks past the homeless man again but this time to find him collapsed on the floor. The narrative from then on follows how Shaun tries to overcome his guilt firstly by trying to help a man being mugged which ends up backfiring resulting in him getting hurt. He finally decides the best way to overcome his guilt is to volunteer at a local charity shop that helps the homeless.


Everyone talk about their role in turn!

Danayet- Director
Tom- Cinematographer
Louise-Producer
Tyrese- Sound editor
TS- Editor and Sound Recordist
Emily- Art Director


A film that brought on inspiration for this piece was the film Fight Club directed by David Fincher.

'Jack' has a mundane boring life that consists of the same things of going to work and going home with no change or difference until he starts going to self help groups and finally creating his own through his alter ego Tyler Durden.

The idea of a man living a boring stereotypical work life was inspiration for our character Shaun who lives a lifestyle of going to work in a call centre then going home to watch the TV. This is until he finds a homeless man he walks past everyday collapsed. This similar epiphany of wanting to change things happens to Shaun that 'Jack' also feels.

While 'Jack' uses violence to get our of his everyday routine we wanted our character to have a less violent change. Instead Shaun is going to volunteer at a local charity preferably a shelter charity that helps the homeless to find places to sleep over night.

Another influence is the Pursuit of Happyness which is the story of a man and his young son who are made homeless. Chris Gardener is made homeless after losing the family money through a bad investment deal meaning him and his son are left to live on the street. They are helped however from a church that offers shelter to the homeless. We wanted to capture this idea of how it is hard for the homeless living on the street but that help is available too. Our character Shaun is going to volunteer at a charity shop that helps people in similar situations to get over the guilt he is feeling about not offering the homeless man money.


Throughout the film we wanted to portray the message of how hard it is to be homeless. We backed this up through filming at the charity shop, Emmaus, who not only help homeless people but in exchange for them working their offer them food and a bed.


After losing our original actor we recast the character of Shaun with another actor that we had auditioned. He took on the role well and portrayed Shaun in the way that we wanted.

Following that we cast Meriel as his mother as Tom had worked with her before and thought she would do well at portraying his mum. We had already agreed to Sid playing the part of Shaun’s father before we recast Shaun meaning we had a problem now due to the fact they did not look like they could be father and son. We rewrote the script to make Sid now a stepfather.

Following dropouts TS took on the role of the homeless man and we also had to drop the scene with the paramedics, as again we had a no show.



For the house scenes we used Danayet’s house as this meant that we did not have a strict time limit of when we could shoot so we could get every angle and shot that we wanted.

For the charity shop scene Louise emailed the location expressing an interest to film there, as we wanted to help promote the charity while making the film. The managers of the shop were very interested in the film and let us shoot there before they opened in the morning. We also used one of the staff for the role of the shop assistant to again show the friendliness and helpfulness of the store.

Originally for the call centre scene we had agreed with the library that we could shoot in one of the rooms there. However on arriving at the library we were informed they had not been told so we were unable to shoot there even with proof in emails. This meant that we had to move to a different room in the Owen building however the location still worked effectively.

Our last location was one of the underpasses situated around Sheffield that we filmed during the weekend as we felt it would the quietest time as people usually use them during the week to get to work.



  •       Tracking Dolly
  •       Slider
  •       Canon 5D
  •       50mm lens
  •       24mm lens
  •       Dedo lights
  •       Tripod
  •       Reflector
  •       Zoom
  •       Marantz




Successes:
  • Our organisation during the production
  • The pace of the film
  • The actor's performances
  • The use of angles and colours

Weaknesses
  • The sound during the fight scene
  • The sudden change in main actor




Tuesday, 2 December 2014

Filming-01/12/14

The next shoot day was to re-shoot the call centre and elevator scenes that were having to be changed since we had to cast a new actor.

Call sheet below:




We had an agreement with the library that we could shoot after 6:30pm as can be seen in the screenshots below:




However on our arrival at the library we were informed that as the staff had not been told of the shoot we were not allowed to film. Due to this we had to find a spare classroom in the Owen building to set up our call centre scene.

Another problem that occurred during this part of the filming was the absence of a sound recordist. T.S. had informed us well in advance that he was unable to record sound due to a rehearsal so we asked our sound recordist, Tyrese, if he was available. Tyrese agreed to record sound as seen below in the screenshot:


Tyrese, who's FB name in this case is ArtistSimple, agreed above to attend the shoot and record the sound. However when he didn't turn up at the shoot we rang him and he said that we had not informed him of filming and said he wasn't going to show up.

Due to this we had to record the sound using just the Zoom attached to the camera rather than with a boom mic like we planned.

Forms and contacting Emmaus

To schedule the shoot at Emmaus I emailed their retail manager Charley. She was very interested in the film and agreed to let us film as long as it was before the shop opens at 9am.

As an agreement we are going to show the name of the shop during the film and make sure to thank them and the credits to help promote the shop.

Email sent to the charity shop


Filming-28/11/14

The next day we met at 7:30am to film the charity shop scene. We had contacted a charity shop called  Emmaus which not only supports homeless people in Sheffield but also provides them with food and shelter in exchange for them volunteering at the shop.

We felt this was the most suitable place to film the scene as we wanted to give the shop some coverage and really push our message through the film.

As we had less time than we first anticipated we were only able to film for 50 minutes as the charity shop wanted us to have left by 9am so they had time to set up. However we worked quickly to make sure we had all the the footage we would need.


T.S. did sound as Tyrese was unavailable for the shoot.

Call sheet for the day:


Filming-27/11/14



Our next scheduled shoot was to do the underpass scene. However our actor was now unable to shoot during the day because of a job interview so we changed the filming time to 6:30pm and decided to shoot the fight scene and the news reporter scene instead.

For the fight scene we used an alley just to the side of Danayet's house. The orange lighting created great silhouettes on the camera but also added an atmosphere to the whole scene as both actor and audience were unable to make out the faces of the people involved in the fight.


T.S. took on the role of sound recordist as Tyrese was unable to make the shoot.
Call sheet for the day:


Wednesday, 26 November 2014

Signed artist agreements

Below are the signed artist agreements (addresses have been deleted):

Declan's agreement (Shaun)

Declan's agreement (Shaun)

Meriel's agreement (Mum)

Meriel's agreement (Mum)

Sid's agreement (Step-Dad)

Sid's agreement (Dad)